This is our team (Sarah Boris) poster. We took the idea of reborning butterfly and create a 4 picture-story about life and endless transformations. We kept it quite simple as a layout and colour palette, but that was the best choice for us considering the very short deadline we had.
What could be done better?
This would be definitely the message. After receiving the feedback from the rest of the class, I noticed that the massage wasn’t strong or understandable enough. And actually the message is the most important thing when telling a story. That is why I believe our message should be transformed.
The second thing that I think should be changed is the background. Something simple again, but may be some blocks of solid colours that match everything else and bring it together. 